der Vampir über mir hats erfasst^^

Tore Hogwarts

Der Vampir über mir stimmt mir zu

I hear the sound of a heart
From the shadow in the dark
Waiting for the poison to hit it's mark
(Listen, my son)
I see the darkness surround, the shape on the ground
The killer straight up and a body face down
(Firstborn,last one)
I hear the din of the screams, sorrow in streams
The smell of farewell and gasoline
(Listen, my son)
I see a heart set free
And my legacy
Hear a voice from a shadow that is beckoning me
(Firstborn, last one)

der Vampir über mir soll bloß net den Mi*st von mir lesen.
Bei Labern^^

Tore Hogwarts

Der Vampir über mir kam zu spät um mir das zu sagen.

I hear the sound of a heart
From the shadow in the dark
Waiting for the poison to hit it's mark
(Listen, my son)
I see the darkness surround, the shape on the ground
The killer straight up and a body face down
(Firstborn,last one)
I hear the din of the screams, sorrow in streams
The smell of farewell and gasoline
(Listen, my son)
I see a heart set free
And my legacy
Hear a voice from a shadow that is beckoning me
(Firstborn, last one)

der Vampir über mir hat anscheinend den Mi*st gelesen

Tore Hogwarts

Der Vampir über mir ha vollkommen recht.

I hear the sound of a heart
From the shadow in the dark
Waiting for the poison to hit it's mark
(Listen, my son)
I see the darkness surround, the shape on the ground
The killer straight up and a body face down
(Firstborn,last one)
I hear the din of the screams, sorrow in streams
The smell of farewell and gasoline
(Listen, my son)
I see a heart set free
And my legacy
Hear a voice from a shadow that is beckoning me
(Firstborn, last one)

der Vampir über mir weiß das ich meinen Text selber voll dumm fand^^
und das 2. irgend wie genauso dumm aber besser war^^

Tore Hogwarts

Der Vampir über mir hat wieder recht, schätzt sich aber schlechter ein als er ist

I hear the sound of a heart
From the shadow in the dark
Waiting for the poison to hit it's mark
(Listen, my son)
I see the darkness surround, the shape on the ground
The killer straight up and a body face down
(Firstborn,last one)
I hear the din of the screams, sorrow in streams
The smell of farewell and gasoline
(Listen, my son)
I see a heart set free
And my legacy
Hear a voice from a shadow that is beckoning me
(Firstborn, last one)

was sagt da der Vampir über mir?
Aber ja Vampir über mir ich bin schlecht im selbst einschätzen da ich immer etwas kritisch an mir selbst bin wenn es um Geschichten,Bildern und Gedichten geht.^^

Tore Hogwarts

Der Vampir über mir ist ziemlich selbstkritisch.

I hear the sound of a heart
From the shadow in the dark
Waiting for the poison to hit it's mark
(Listen, my son)
I see the darkness surround, the shape on the ground
The killer straight up and a body face down
(Firstborn,last one)
I hear the din of the screams, sorrow in streams
The smell of farewell and gasoline
(Listen, my son)
I see a heart set free
And my legacy
Hear a voice from a shadow that is beckoning me
(Firstborn, last one)

der Vampir über mir hat vergessen das das nur bei der Kunst so ist.
Bei Noten ist es mal wieder ganz was anderes

Tore Hogwarts

Der Vampir über mir sagt das ich vergesslich sei.

I hear the sound of a heart
From the shadow in the dark
Waiting for the poison to hit it's mark
(Listen, my son)
I see the darkness surround, the shape on the ground
The killer straight up and a body face down
(Firstborn,last one)
I hear the din of the screams, sorrow in streams
The smell of farewell and gasoline
(Listen, my son)
I see a heart set free
And my legacy
Hear a voice from a shadow that is beckoning me
(Firstborn, last one)

der Vampir über mir erzählt blödsinn^^

Tore Hogwarts

Der Vampir über mir sagt das ich Blödsinn laber und er verwirrt mich.

I hear the sound of a heart
From the shadow in the dark
Waiting for the poison to hit it's mark
(Listen, my son)
I see the darkness surround, the shape on the ground
The killer straight up and a body face down
(Firstborn,last one)
I hear the din of the screams, sorrow in streams
The smell of farewell and gasoline
(Listen, my son)
I see a heart set free
And my legacy
Hear a voice from a shadow that is beckoning me
(Firstborn, last one)

jaa ich hab den Vamoir über mir verwirrt^^
noch nen Talent von mir^^

Tore Hogwarts